1. HOUSE INSIDE DAY
2. FISH TANK INSIDE DAY
3. IN THE GIRLS ROOM INSIDE NIGHT
4. GETS PULLED INTO THE FISH TANK INSIDE NIGHT
5. THEN IN HEAVEN WIV HER DAD OUTSIDE NIGHT
6. IN HE DADS NEW HOUSE INSIDE DAY
7. THEN SHE WAKES UP IN HER BED INSIDE DAY
8. THEN TO HER MUMS ROOM INSIDE DAY
9. BACK TOO HER OWN ROOM INSIDE DAY
Good start; you now need to add a brief description of what happens in each scene. You also need to look at my blogger post again to see the exact order to write your location headings.
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