A little gold fish is sitting in a fish tank and it lives with its owner millie and her mum and little brother in a three bed room house her mums name is kerri and her little brothers name is layton they all live as one big family even though there dad died in the war.
My story is about how this fish start to talk to this little girl called millie and one day about a year after her dad died she was confused so she did not no what to do about it so she started to talk to her little fish and amaziling this fish started to talk back and she was so surprised by it she thought she was hearing things and she was so happy that there was some one
Really good start here Christine; you have the basis of a good story here, you now need to think about the sequence of events in your story. What would you see, scene by scene, if you were watching the film.
ReplyDelete