scince of my story

1. int house day
the little girl is waiting for her mum to get back
Her mum gives her a gold fish.

2. int girls room day
the girl goes put this fish in the fish tank she falss a sleep
PASSAGE OF TIME.

3. int girls room/fish tank night
Then about an hour later the gold fish pulls her in to the fish tank and
takes her to her dad in heaven.

4. ext heaven night
the little girl is crying because she is standing there facing her dad.

5. int dads home night
Dad shows her around his heaven home.
little girl says can i come live with you.


6. int dads/house day
in the dads home and they are sitting there having a chat with her about how things are going but then it comes to the little girl crying again
SHE falls a sleep.

7. int her bed day
the little girl was a sleep it was just a dream but she woke up thinking that the fish acctully pulled her into the fish tank and she saw her dad
It was her dream.


8. int her mums/room day
the little girl gets up out of her bed but trips then she gets back up keeps running to her mums room and stats crying
her mum says okai okai
ITS was just a dream.

9. int her room day
the little girl goes back to her room and stares at her fish she named golden but every thing that happend in that one night was all just a dream because their was no fish no tank.
Ellie may the little girl was so up set all she wanted was a gold fish called golden.